1. Too Technical
Liquid funds ≠ VCs. Lead with investability, not architecture.
2. No Token Thesis
How does value accrue to the token? If it doesn’t, why hold it?

3. No Catalysts
What moves this? Why now? Where's the growth?
4. No Edge
Show traction, market position, and why you'll stay ahead.

The Pattern Behind Effective Pitches?
- Be clear on what you do - and why you’ll win.
- Show proof (e.g. users, revenue, growth).
- Articulate the token’s value accrual, potential catalysts, and key risks.
This is not intended as advice. Projects should consult their own counsel.