1. Too Technical

Liquid funds ≠ VCs. Lead with investability, not architecture.

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2. No Token Thesis

How does value accrue to the token? If it doesn’t, why hold it?

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3. No Catalysts

What moves this? Why now? Where's the growth?

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4. No Edge

Show traction, market position, and why you'll stay ahead.

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The Pattern Behind Effective Pitches? 

  • Be clear on what you do - and why you’ll win.
  • Show proof (e.g. users, revenue, growth).
  • Articulate the token’s value accrual, potential catalysts, and key risks.

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This is not intended as advice. Projects should consult their own counsel.